Black Poetry : 'Random'

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  1. Poet Gryoht

    Poet Gryoht Member MEMBER

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    *This joint is composed according to a poetic form known as the 'Sapphic Stanza,' which is 4 lines of 11 syllables each; ending with a 5th line of 5 syllables. I haven't perfected it yet, but its coming along. Hope you all enjoy.


    Convention walks right out of my door quietly.
    Caution has already been thrown to the wind.
    Conception of a lust that consumes my body.
    Images of sweat-drenched limbs sticky in sex.
    Painted Illusions.

    Walking this life in a whirlwind of love,
    Breathing the fumes you leave behind everyday,
    I cease to exist, becoming your heart beat;
    becoming your eye-blink, the idea's you think...
    Sculpted delusions.

    You expect me to embrace what i've never had.
    You expect me to dive deep into the unknown.
    You desire me to become one with you daily...
    blowing in the wind, flowing in life's stream.
    Paintings and Sculptures.

    Like steaming grits and eggs on a Saturday,
    You give good love entirely having me open.
    No fear of being commited for insanity,
    I envelop stepping outside of my mind.
    My life in paintings.

    ~Poet Gryoht
     
  2. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice .... a style of your own .... once u have competed your sculpting and painting ... incorporate life's essential tools and build .... on a foundation that is unmovable ....
     
  3. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice write! I like that style of poetry!
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep is the logic
    The logic of this flow
    Loved every scribe
    This was a unique flow
    really feeling this one
     
  5. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet Gryoht....

    Innovative, I must say I do like....I give it: :star: :star: :star: :star:
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love love love this one
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 tyte joint u got it handz down flow on !!!!