Black Poetry : Random

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mzpoetic8705, Dec 27, 2005.

  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Had a vision of incredible pleasure from my
    Words delivered to you
    And then I read these scriptures of solid completion to my stratified life; here I exist in these walls
    Made of love and surrounded by confusion
    See, no one understands the simple phrase of love
    But if I had the chance to leave myself
    I would raise myself
    To love myself
    To create another one who means
    MYSELF
    here I lie when speaking
    And cry when sleeping
    For my face doesn’t allow me to see exactly what I want to
    But if it were up to me, I’d kill for someone to hold these
    Tears that have fallen incompletely
    Still dripping slowly
    As time continues to cry these blues
    I will have to write these blues in my eyes

    Who is the one who can hold a heart without feeling?
    Not I,
    I have held silly love riddles in my head but
    Have yet to figure them out
    Who can help one who never helps himself?
    Not I,
    So I cry for your heart
    And lean on your hand for support and
    Will never allow my back to give in
    But here is where I will sit alone
    And burn these pens and papers
    So that no one will find me
    Alone I sit
    Awaiting his arrival
    When it will be….I don’t know

    to be continued

    MzPoetic
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a very moving poem flow on poet.:welldone:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He will come
    Sister Poet will be the plus
    To your poetic equation
    Much Love Poet
     
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    "But if I had the chance to leave myself
    I would raise myself
    To love myself
    To create another one who means
    MYSELF"
    Might be my favorite lines from this poem, hard to say.... We all want someone who will know us, be able to sympathize with us, appreciate the uniqueness of us. You expressed these feelings so well. Loving this piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love this piece here ......tyte joint
     
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