Black Poetry : Ramblin's Bout You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Oct 9, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pain and pleasure
    The price for the treasure
    How good is it?
    I really can't measure
    But one thing I know
    I can't let you go
    Can't you see?
    You did it to me
    Like no one ever did it before
    I was hooked on you girl
    Before I got in the door
    Am I leaving?
    Hell no
    Not now
    Not never
    I'll be loving you forever
    Tired of reading my silly little rhyme
    It's all about you
    It's how I spend my time
    I could write about you all day long
    Blow kisses in the wind
    Sing a love song
    But of all the things
    I could ever say or do
    I'm just hoping you feel
    My love for you

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    silly little rhyme?

    nuh uhh....how bout "crazy love allatyme"?

    this is cute ta def, BE. :)

    a
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sir BE..........

    Love N Basketball
    man this was so sweet and flowed out so smooveeeee!
    she gotta love u even more Mr.Lover lover...:D :toast:
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    silly ma ***. THis was sweeter than ma sistas koolaid.




    One


    ps been missin you
     
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