Black Poetry : Ramblings of a Woman's heart

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Jun 4, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes letting go of a bad thing,
    is harder than trying to hold on to a good thing.
    I have taken this story of ours and
    twisted it this way and that, trying to make sense of it all.
    and still my heart is confused
    I’ve made numerous excuses
    to myself trying to explain away
    the hurt, the anger and the pain.
    and still my soul is bitter
    I have tried to see things from your perspective
    but all I can feel is the heartbreak, the tears the un-describable pain.
    and still my spirit is dazed
    I don’t understand
    I can’t quite make it out, you see I loved you.
    I truly thought there was some redeeming quality that my unconditional love could bring out in us.
    But I have come to the realization that “We” was wrong
    “We” were never meant to be
    and because we defied fate and manifested another’s destiny
    the world is not quite right.
    I feel shifted
    off-centered
    somehow incomplete.
    My colors are not my TRUE colors.
    and still my heart is broken
    stunned
    a casualty of this relationship
    an innocent by-stander in the war we created called “Relationship”.
    The crazy thing is: I look into your eyes
    even now ; and see the same dazed, confused look.
    You know no better than I, how to fix us.
    Something that has been broken for so long, that even after being put to rights still looks and feels broken.
    and still “Us” is no more.

    Natasha
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!!! NATASHA

    VERY DEEP
    WELL FELT
    AND WOW! WIT MY MOUTH WIDE OPEN!!:eek:
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was mad deep
    Natasha love it
    I really think we need a second look
    Cause US is no more
    Sister is deep with this one
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you took the words rite out of my mouth girl...loved this...
     
  5. nevar

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    i think us women can relate to this matter. flow on Natasha.:kiss1:
     
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