Black Poetry : Ramblings Of A Deranged Black Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Sep 6, 2001.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many words
    So many thoughts
    Chaotic notions
    Of a rambling deranged black woman
    So many burdens that can’t be
    Juxtapositioned
    So many things to say
    So much already written
    My stream of consiousnes
    Rages on like a raging river
    Cascading waterfalls of words and thoughts
    Jumbled together
    To create a hazy semblance of thought
    so many words
    so many thoughts
    all colliding together
    a prisim of colorful forrays
    hidden behind the all seeing eye
    words
    mumblings
    crazy adaptations of truth
    a secret longing for sanity
    just outside my grasp
    I shout
    I scream
    I sob
    I whisper
    Still no one hears the words
    Of this rambling deranged black woman

    Natasha :nuts:
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear ya, I hear ya!!! Nice piece queen...

    blak
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well

    I feel ya on this......quite seriously!


    a
     
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