Black Poetry : Rambling Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetic Legend, Oct 5, 2008.

  1. Poetic Legend

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    How do I share my thoughts when eye/I
    Can't see past the madness because I am lost in the dark
    No a light nor candle not even a spark
    I dream like the homeless in the park
    I'm sorry my throat is kind of tart
    The hatred is ripping us apart
    Why listen to the devil when God has a hold of your heart?

    See it's more than fashion clothes
    And bet 106 and park videos
    The world is like a burning torch
    Yet the flames get passed around like an olympic sport
    Yet we as people should set foot like an gigantic fort
    Of some sort

    So if my words have meaning to anyone who reads
    Anyone who has been on bending knee
    Who can see we reflect hard than glass on water
    But don't believe just look harder
    And your mind will go further
    Than the man who called himself my farther
    When I was little he beat my sister felt more like my daughter
    Cause I was her real only farther

    Sorry for rambling poets apardon......
     
  2. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!


    Poetic Legend,

    Not a problem, release!

     
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    sometimes it helps to let it come out how you feel it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Feeling the depth of ya heart and the full concept i surly can relate
    go head express / vent / release and stay strong keep ya head up !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt these rambling thoughts, and what I felt was the need to get past the frivolous, and on to what is real, what is important. Flow on.
     
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