Black Poetry : Rambling Road

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jan 4, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trying to get through this...
    just rambling
    not sure where
    this will lead

    So, did you hear me?
    Care to know my thoughts?
    Rather than just agree.
    Ever go down a road
    And not know where it goes?
    Maybe I missed a turn.
    I'm anywhere the wind blows.
    Need a steady direction.
    God, please help me...

    Look closely, can't you see I'm screaming?
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I personally feel this here...

    Nice.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes... I've been down that road.
    Prayer will lead you in the right direction.

    I enjoyed the rambling :)


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i been down this road so many times...
    i feel this write....
    Peace unto you
    my sister
    Angel
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Positivemindset, Cocoabutterskyn, Mzblkangel...thank you for your responses, and feeling this...Sorry you've been on this road before, sems like a road well traveled. And yes, Cocoabutterskyn, prayer is the answer.
     
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    I really feel ya, sis. I been there before. I think not only prayer but listening to the silence helps. Tryin to force things only makes it worse. Great flow - I am sendin you peace.
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks gempis for your reply and the peace sent.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister...I can relate
    we've all been here before
    sometimes you have to
    stop and pray...to find the way
    love the flow!
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy, appreciate that you can feel this. I know about that standing in the same place feeling--I call it the 1 foot forward 2 steps back shuffle. I'll be ok though...Peace.
    Angelicsage, glad you loved the flow. Feeling company on that road many have traveled. And yes, prayer helps... alot.
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Personally, I feel everything this poem says.....mcuh luv for this
     
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