Black Poetry : Rambling of a Lost Poem

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is it about or is it
    Within a dream of reality
    For when I speak with you…
    Directly but indirectly….
    A fountain pours down…
    Let me unwine at my own pace…..
    As I face you
    Take me as I am…
    Winter so cold…as spring
    shows its colors..summer begins…
    as the fountain pours unto me….
    you an
    I as
    we as
    us becomin one
    possess me with all of you
    so I can lose it in your soul..
    exhale and embrace the
    essence of you
    ramblin in thoughts…
    I don’t know…
    Words just flowin and flowin
    Finding it harder to place…..
    So much love inside…
    What about me….
    do you hear ?
    do you care ?
    do you dare……????
    the madness in your heart
    as it hits my soul…
    I hold it dear….
    Not tryin to lose……
    don’t……..
    ………….. destroy me…..
    love me completely
    love me hazily….lead me
    out this maze
    of pain….taken my hand…
    the fountain pours……………..as
    ………. you roam my
    mine…and release in…….
    ………… my heart…
    to pick up my soul…
    wipes……..
    ……… my tears…
    and picks……..
    …………… up my fears….
    as I unfold to you
    I come true..
    Heart of pure….
    With a love
    from above
    ………..Within side of me….
    blkangel thang 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice heart felt scribe flow on ...speak
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these are some great ramblings, sister girl
     
  4. angelicsage

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    sometimes it just needs to be said
    rambling or not...
    feeling the flow
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$..thank you for the love on dis Peace Angel

    gempis thanks gurl..Peace

    angelicsage glad ya feelin my flow...ramblin yes
    indeed needs to be said...thanks my sister
    for the love and support..Peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those ramblings can be such pure thoughts...deep scribe.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname and Cindy
    thanks for the love and feelin this flow
    much love to each
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    ramble on sista...
    ramble on...:)
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Can a brotha get a plate of that....for life. :D

    :toast:
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

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    awww khasm thanks for the love and support
    much love my brother...Angel
     
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