Black Poetry : rambling in motion.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling as you drunk
    Or just high…..
    Movin in slow motion….
    Listening to the drummer
    Play its theme…..
    Sitting back in a dream…
    Floatin

    Develop a style thas
    been copyright
    To a tea…in motion
    of its own….

    Burning bridges floating
    Thinking….about to release
    In a bliss of redemption
    Wondering defining
    Reason of reasons
    Below the surface
    An upon the skies….
    Forces pull and push
    Hit with a blow
    Then you know….

    Everything happens
    for a reasons
    Defining the purpose
    of every rose..
    As the mystery lays….
    Let it lye within all is
    not the reason
    Of the season…

    Twirlin in the sky….
    Flowin with the breeze….
    Please….
    Look within the mind
    Surf the area….blank
    vanish
    let it heal within
    and search the being
    not the reason
    Of the season…….
    So what is the answer…..
    All question are not
    meant to be answered
    don’t mean you sold your soul
    just means your only you…
    the matter….reveal the dark
    pain that wonders…
    as it shields the skin
    within burning like hell
    yell yell yell
    and still no answer
    can be found….

    For when emotions of love flow
    Its no way out or to hide……

    Develop a style thas
    been copyright
    To a tea…in motion
    of its own….


    a blkangel thang.....2004
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heat over comes and
    the passion flows..
    not the season
    of the reason……
    blind to the sight
    but the heart is open
    as you take a dip
    lip to lip you taste
    the divine essence of another…
    blissful moment meant for 2
    as heavens bells ring….

    As the answer is still
    Unknown of
    why’s
    what’s and
    who’s

    colors of the rainbow flows
    as love takes you in……
    Twirlin in the sky….
    Flowin with the breeze….

    For when emotions of love flow
    Its no way out or to hide……

    Develop a style thas
    been copyright
    To a tea…in motion
    of its own….
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, this style is in a motion of its own. Some things don't have an answer, very nice flow.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes indeed nice one sis
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' my my the motion
    is waving within it self
    dis was tyte and on point
    love dis one wooooweeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice sense of movement
    and evolution in this flow!
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage..thanks for the love :spinstar:

    $$RICH$$..thank you i am happy
    you enjoyed it so much :blush:

    Bluewater....thanks sis..means alot u repling as you do :spinstar:

    watzinaname...thanks for the support :spinstar:


    :angel1:
     
  8. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re:To mzblkangel

    Indeed I demonstrate comformity!!

    This poem is real good
    I just loved it
    Please continue to write
    very tight scibe!!!!!!
    GREAT JOB!!!!!!!

    Peace and love
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    tyte piece sis...
    one love
    khasm
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin:
    All in your motion and your flow.. tight as always u are .
     
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