Black Poetry : Ramblin' bout Grown Folk

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Oct 11, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the current mix
    needs to be fixed
    rearranged
    for positive change
    grown folks
    speaking on what they don't know
    minds locked up in envy
    impossible to grow
    he said, she said
    alive and well
    the promise of secracy
    broken as we tell
    potential friendships
    ruined by a lustful play
    solid foundations
    turned into clay
    words designed to tantilize
    blow a mind
    fantasize
    sooner or later
    in the light of day
    exposed as one who loves to play
    masters of the sensual game
    using to be used
    it's all the same
    sure to get older
    grown folks get bolder
    want what they want
    when they want it
    take what they can
    when they can get it
    grown folks got me in a quandry
    as I sort my own soiled laundry
    doing our thing
    ain't even gonna quit
    hopin' we don't slip
    grown folks is a trip

    BE
    (c) 2002
     
  2. Queen_of_Spades

    Queen_of_Spades Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (nods) Yep and I couldn't agree with you more.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most def coz it's sho nuff going round
    i hear ya BE......
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    I was just thinking about the greedy

    corporate execs of ENRON

    you captured it all in one fair SWOOP

    keep writing BE :)

    pd
     
  5. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE, I am with you on each one of these lines. WOW, we are all tripping aren't we? You have said soo much here. Amazing piece.
     
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