Black Poetry : Rambles of lost words.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The pain
    But the love
    The hurt
    The emptiness
    But the love
    Screaming inside
    Wanting to die
    But the love
    Holds me
    The bond
    The joy
    But the hurt
    Crying inside
    Wanting
    Just yearning
    The depth of me is u
    The pain
    The hurt
    Oh, why do you love me
    …………..But hurt me
    Hurt me?
    Why do you say the things you say
    And then say your sorry
    ...............I am sorry
    My love is pure my love is you
    Upon that star you are
    .............In my heart
    The hurt
    The cold
    Like a cloud full of rain
    The pain seems to hold
    But, when I close my eyes
    It pours and the bitterness of you
    Come through
    The pain
    The hurt
    But the love
    The hurt
    The pain
    But the love


    (c) 2005
    new vision
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the window of this open like a broken glass and a sweet sunshine
    the love and pain stain the heart deeply i feel this one in wayz that
    not even i know of but feel .
    words of lost band together in a perfect picture painted tyte write
    nice to be reading u sista ..
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do understand how the pain and love can get all twisted and tangled. This was beautifully laid down, angel.
     
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    peace,

    beautiful indeed sis! who can luv u better than u............

    peace
     
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    The depth of U, sister, is U.

    Love self completely & others will 2.

    Nice.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :horse: thank you all for the loving support means alot thanks family

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    most welcome beloveth sis.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "We always hurt the ones we love" ...we also know that, love...makes us do and say foolish things, and "Hurt" just happens to sit on the throne of all.
    I loved this piece, thanks for sharing your mighty pen.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks QT happy you enjoyed my scribe Peace Angel
     
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    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....*snaps fingers*

    Good job sista!
     
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