Black Poetry : RAISE UP!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Apr 16, 2006.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I get mixed emotions

    Everytime I hear you say

    That Jesus,

    Was only human

    Given up to raise the dead

    Anytime you lose a friend

    Mournful for the brother

    Meeting an untimely end

    Dying for the others...

    Coming back to life again

    Wowing doubting Thomas

    Keeping sacred promises

    BACK-IN-LOVE,

    Again ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :sand:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright (Easter 2006)
     
  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang such true and serious thougths of statements
    goin on in the drop
    i was feelin yo flo so flo on my bratha



    blackluv and bp
     
  3. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    @1PoetSought.....

    I really enjoyed the thorough simplicity of this piece. Flow on Brother:)
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everytime I turn around, back in love... again...
    This was on point, poet
    Keep doin' the thang
    One love
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Jesus.

    Humble am I in the presence of the Lord, fearful of God, Almighty.
     
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    word...this is how u lay down the law to naysayers...
    great poem man...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wordful clash on point bruh !
     
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