Black Poetry : Rainy Night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NDeep, Jun 9, 2003.

  1. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A misty cloud covered sky
    Cumulus collecting, sheading tears together
    Clouds cry
    Beauty this Rainy Night

    The air cool, moist, and breezy
    The droplets soothe my aching body
    My troubles no longer torment me
    Beauty this Rainy Night

    The ground is wet
    As the raindrops collect
    A meandering stream flows
    Beauty this Rainy Night

    Releasing fears and sheading a tear
    Your heart and mind clear
    You realize and remember everything that is dear
    Beauty this Rainy Night

    Stopping to listen
    To crystal glisten
    Wishing to hear each rain drop fall with purpose
    Beauty this Rainy Night

    Hoping someone else is feeling what you feel
    Hoping that from this moment you can steal
    A glimpse of...
    Beauty this Rainy Night
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful...i love the imagery and imagination...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was sweet flowin the imagination was awesome
    keep flowin
     
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