Black Poetry : Rainbow You

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are my rainbow
    you are my prism placed up high
    a collection of archways to a golden treasure
    a fairytale ending in the sky
    You are the indigo
    the midnight, the mystical eerie shadow
    the powerful allure of a veil, shielding the truth
    that only few are strong enough to know

    For you are that green budding,
    my naturally creative side that sprouts
    blossoming my emotions into variations
    of breathless whispers and joyous shouts

    You are an orange so tasty and sweet,
    so juicy it's impelled to burst forth
    spraying all of its lusciousness
    it's the nectar I've been thirsting for

    You are blue, sometimes sadly melancholy
    sometimes, misty, as peaceful as can be...
    blue, also the backdrop for this rainbow
    the depths of which we never completely see

    And yes, you are that red, hot and
    blazing, a fire too hot to contain
    only true passion can extinguish you
    a total drenching of love's rain

    These are just a few of the feelings
    that color a rainbow
    that color my thoughts of you
    more than you will ever know...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow i love the splash of this rainbow
    so warm and colorful how divine it is
    making me think and see through a
    window vision .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And what a vision that would be to look out of your window and see, thank you Rich for responding so.
     
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    look in the mirror through your eyez is my window !
    i really love this poem ........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww, so happy that you love it, and can see what I see, Rich. Thank you again.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Watz...I see those colors in you as well...Beautifully written I must say...But that nuthin new to you, Poet...

    Peace!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So sweet of you to say bigdrizzle, appreciated a million times brotha poet.
     
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    I enjoyed this poetic trip very well done...hmmm i see them rainbows..oh yeah!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy to know you could see those rainbows in your view blkangel, thank you so much.
     
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    Beautiful...simply, beautiful.
     
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