Black Poetry : Rain

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  1. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    R A I N

    How can you describe the feelings you have about something
    that blesses everything it touches?

    My belief is that Rain is an angels tears
    sent to ease my pain and wash away my fears
    when everything drys up inside me and withers away
    Rain rejuvenates me and gives me strength for another day
    So far away, yet can touch me wherever I may go
    how did Rain get this power? I don’t even pretend to know
    Hearing the beat of Rain, is like the beautiful sound of a harp
    it’s strange hearing the beat of Rain, inside my very own heart!

    I hear whispers of Rain from the deepest corners of my mind
    I’m not quite prepared for it I was terrified to find
    Thinking about it makes my temperature rise and sweat on my palms condense
    How did Rain get inside me? It just makes no sense!!
    How can Rain fall all the way from heaven, and still have enough impact
    to make a grown man lose control of his emotions, and not know how to react?

    The very thought of Rain, makes me want to wake up every day
    I rejoice when I hear her voice and hang on to everything I hear her say
    Rain is supposed to mean cloudy vision and an overcast sky
    but for me, Rain brings a smile to my lips and a sparkle in my eye
    I wish I could absorb Rain through my skin and lubricate my soul
    just gazing into her eye: the sky, promises raptures untold

    Rain could be labeled as a narcotic to me
    she’s got me more addicted than nicotine or THC
    I consider Rain 100% female, because I want to be her man
    I pray for cloudy dayz, so I can catch Raindrops in my hand
    I can smell her in the air before she comes into view
    Rain fills me with emotions that are strange and new

    Rain causes a storm in my soul, worse than thunder and lightning
    the sheer intensity of it, is actually kinda frightening
    but at the same time, I feel more alive than I ever have before
    It’s like Rain had the key to a long-locked door
    my passions are coming out, like worms after Rain
    the wind is in my ear repeating her name
    I have no choice but to succumb to her charms
    and now I won’t be happy till she’s lying in my arms!
    Derrick H.
     
  2. ladye

    ladye Active Member MEMBER

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    tight!!!!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    rain drop of pure sparkling clean emotional water
    what i seek in every drop of love that falls
    tyght vibe poet!!!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow ono what is no doubt one of God's treasures for us to witness.

    blak
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyght and I enjoyed the read
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another tyte rain fall poeticly ...uppin this one back !
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well, this poem certainly shed that splash of enlightenment...............

    :rain:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got saturated in the images here. Enjoyed this flow.
     
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