Black Poetry : Rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lahana Mysteria, May 13, 2003.

  1. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's been a while since I've been here,it's good to be back


    "Rain,light and mist scented.
    Warm,content rain dropping into my skin,
    cleansing,empowering,filling this soul.

    Smiling through barely there drops,
    forcing yourself into this world with hardness and thunder.
    Nourishing all that absorbs you,
    overflowing all that craves to hold you.

    Rain,warm and content,above me,
    around me,through me.You are life.
    Come and make your presence known...

    Sweet rain.
    Soul,spirit,dream,life,
    A child..."
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very sweet poem.......i can almost feel the emotions.......very nice...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wonderful to feel ya flow again
    welcome back home
    da soul of love in ever drop of rain
    like a spirit of life so devine

    love dis here
     
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