Quiet Poetry Lounge : RAIN STORM pt.II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The radiance of love
    splashed in each drop
    with a brilliant spray
    rain drops pour unforseen

    clashing the inland in sparkles
    i searched through the storm
    she continue her calling
    yet we never looked up

    Felling a rapture in the ocean
    one spirit of love to one heart
    we known as one soul yet divided
    in streams of multi colors of rainbow

    my heart cries out to comfort her
    she weeps to be held within
    still we walked the path in search
    this heavy storm pours a waterfall

    Until the great thunder emphatical
    all who witness the storm fiery colors
    saw the love movement so endearment
    yet we not took the moment to look
    up in the crystal glist

    The adventurous search continues
    my loveth i know awaits me
    from her voice we touch mentals
    as the sheet wetness blaket the land
    this journey is near for the warmth is felt
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, I had to read this twice, many layers of meanings in this. The images of this rain fall were so vividly beautiful. May they continue to look up...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhh !!!
    Thank u sista watz i hope the continue journey end in warmth
    the grace and beauty of everlasting .....................................
     
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    This was very sensual
    Loving and endearing piece
    Much Love Bruh
     
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    Wonderful,wonderful piece of beauty!:hearts1: :great:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Tantrum & cursed heart for the visit and love to this stormy joint
     
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    hey sonny its grandma saying how the hell are ya. oh whats that earl tell the son say hey no earl we cant do the nasty. ol horny devil. anyway chile earl say hey chile. this was awesome as you whipper snapper say. you got it going on hold up earl trying to say something. what in hell do you want earl im trying to tell rich he's was good. (earl) he in the hood (grandma) no earl rich good (earl) he in the hood tell the son i said whatup westside!! (grandma) no dummy i said rich was good. watch this rich you know what im about to say he claims he cant hear. all i got to say one or two words and his ears have healed. (grandma) earl booty time (earl) when come on and let me beat it up, beat it up. see what i mean rich he think he slick. well sonny its been a pleasure tell sadie i said hey. keep up the good work as well. let me go and handle some grown folk business. i'll be back in a 5 sec thats all he can last. wasting my laying down for this fool. you need to let grandma give you some puppy love. watch out now bye until next time.:hearts1:
     
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    Earl getting da do for u so sway it , sadie be coming up in here soon
    she got something on her mind , oh boy not again ! Thankz Nevar
     
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    Wonderful Piece.
    I am loving this.
     
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    Rich you know you write so beautiful
    I love this poem....:kiss:
     
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