Black Poetry : rain storm in the desert (haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Oct 30, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's pouring outside
    but there is nothing wetter
    than me, missing you


    Alyce (c) 2001
     
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    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woooo

    :D
     
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    I see the rain pour
    through this lovely sentiment
    the wetness is felt


    This is a beautiful piece Ms A. Thank you

    BE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Alyce gurl

    100% pure wetness u got me in awe!
    this said something special
    he better hurry up home wit a dry towel:heart:

    drip drip drip drip !!!!!:D
     
  5. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurrrrrl!

    I'm with Rich. Hubby better hurry up and git home wit ah dry towel. Point well made in 17 drips...or in your case...more! :D
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    When I first read this I thought. WHOA! and AW! Whoa! to how hot :hot: this is from burning wet passion for someone and AW! to how sweet it is, wet from the tears cried :cry: missing someone badly. This is a great Haiku. I loved it. Haiku Salute :toast:


    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poets, I thank you

    for feeling the flow...


    a
     
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    yes....Alyce

    A passionate Haiku of missing him........

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    heartstings pulled by so few words...

    depth beyond equinox...

    beautiful poet.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!

    :lol:

    nice peace alyce.

    if it's dat wet he may need a dry towel and a cumbrella..

    tyte.
    jh.
     
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