Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Oct 30, 2001.
it's pouring outside
but there is nothing wetter
than me, missing you
Alyce (c) 2001
I see the rain pour
through this lovely sentiment
the wetness is felt
This is a beautiful piece Ms A. Thank you
100% pure wetness u got me in awe!
this said something special
he better hurry up home wit a dry towel
drip drip drip drip !!!!!
I'm with Rich. Hubby better hurry up and git home wit ah dry towel. Point well made in 17 drips...or in your case...more!
When I first read this I thought. WHOA! and AW! Whoa! to how hot this is from burning wet passion for someone and AW! to how sweet it is, wet from the tears cried missing someone badly. This is a great Haiku. I loved it. Haiku Salute
Madd Sistahly Love
Poets, I thank you
for feeling the flow...
A passionate Haiku of missing him........
heartstings pulled by so few words...
depth beyond equinox...
nice peace alyce.
if it's dat wet he may need a dry towel and a cumbrella..
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