Quiet Poetry Lounge : RAIN STORM final call...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Feb 10, 2006.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tappin in steps
    splashing in pools
    breaking the mold
    of reflection yet
    this feeling lingers

    Inside my final step
    on this ending journey
    revealed an image
    i so envision within
    da face of thy queeneth

    Behind me she stand
    just beyond my shadow
    of exsistance into realism
    of this fantasy & dream
    i searched so far, so long

    She whispers upon me
    as i embrace her echos
    tasting her lyrical wordz
    as we partake lip 2 lip
    leaving a sensual feeling

    My Beloved arrived
    in my spreaded arms
    just for this day we cherish
    under the glisting fallin sun
    as the starz rise beyond moon

    We now see eye 2 eye looking up
    only to yearn this burnning passion
    that's feverish as i capture
    her sweet essence of love
    inside my captivity of heart

    I so love you long ago
    heard you and lone for you
    now our final hour has arrived
    this st.valentine at the heep
    of this shaple where i vow my love
    give my soul and heart at your feet

    Take me, do what you like
    forth i'm your for the given
    as you are mines for the taken
    this the kind of love mama
    never told us about we found
    and i will treasure it, in forever pleasure
    and our journey end to a new chapter

    I finally found my love fate in da
    mist of this rain storm that paved
    the way from it's rainbow of morrow
    truely a pot of GOLD awaits at the end.


    :ilu: :flowers: :heart: :love: :heart: :kiss2: :heart: :hearts4:
    :hearts2: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts2:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh this was so refreshing and relaxing like my mountain dew. keep them flo's coming and oh grandma said in between the huffing and puffing. said to keep up the good work. now i need to get a exorcism done on my poor ears.ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you Nevar , i had no clue to look up
    for she was there all along within my shadow
    awaiting me to love and be loved ................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She was in the midst
    of your shadow all along
    within the glint of your eyes
    inside the lyrics of your song
    She was one of the twinkles
    in the stars that shine above
    She could be found amongst the
    skipped heartbeats that signaled your love
    In each arc of the rainbow formed
    a different hue of magic streamed
    And as you danced beneath those raindrops
    it was more magical than you even dreamed
    Off to the next chapter you'll find her
    in pages laced with gold
    It will be the final chapter in a love story
    the most beautiful tale ever told...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Yes watz you so on point
    was u in my bedroom reading me
    i'm sure you know what's ahead
    in the mist of a new beginning
    thank u so much and i love your reply .....wow !
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh whats the matter pookie poo you all sensitive now since tonights the nite that we show you a woman!!!!!!!! :tongue3: :kickball:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that was cute Nevar as i reveal thy King
     
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    Kissing me while u slowly grab my thighs,
    Stroke me til i shiver and scream heaven in the sky,
    Rain on me theres no more sunshine,
    Climaxing while we look into each other's eyes

    I really liked this. Keep up the good work, i hope we can do another collab.

    1 luv,

    AM:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'll kiss u in sweet delight
    caress ya erotic thighs
    as i mesmerize deep in yo eyez
    to sensually hypnotize
    i'll slowly stroke u sweet til
    ya knees get weak and let u feel
    me how i'm meek as u scream
    from this extreme and watch u
    cream da sunny dew from dis
    stormy love dats true ................
    Thank u and surely when ever you ready hit me up i'm always free to flow
    glow and let our poetic love show .........................................luv ya Aaliyah
     
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    Hot ending to the 3 chapter
    Saga-Loved the flow on this
    Much Love Poet
     
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