Quiet Poetry Lounge : Rain (ruff cut)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 6, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Behind the wheel
    sky open wide
    rain falling
    or so I thought
    until I stopped
    looked to the sky and
    saw her crying
    only on me.....
    she wanted me
    to feel what she
    felt...really understand
    her.....I wasn't ready
    for the rain...
    I wasn't ready for her
    I only wanted to
    be..............................

    happy...

    ...?


    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    What a vivid picture you draw. Nice scribe.

    One.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U JUST

    PAINTED A PIECE OF THOUGHTFUL MIND
    AND SHE CRIED ON ME!! WOW!! HELLA TYGHT.:toast:
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Blak

    respecting your work more and more each day

    keep flowing brotha

    and i have mutual respect for you brotha
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****!

    I love the visuals on this joynt! brilliant concept!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    verb

    you hitting on all cylinders now

    loving the art man

    loving the flow

    keep the focus
     
  7. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew...
    i too have looked into the clouds eyes
    where her tears come from
    but never has she cried only on me...

    i love this flow blak...
    you are really filling me up.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    wow blak! incredible imagery

    this was just too intense for me...
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaKnEsS...


    very very nice.

    (that's all i could say)

    OneLuv.
    Queen Ga~
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I say it again it still wouldn't be enough but...
    Thank You family.

    blak
    verb
     
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