Black Poetry : Rain or Shine...R U Down???

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 8, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hear the angels sing…
    Release and feel the joy…
    As u walk into the
    path of love..flyin low…
    just like a dove….savor
    the taste of this rapture..
    within a sweet kiss
    we have captured a bliss
    of mystery to uncover….
    Caressin deeply
    Feel thy heart
    Listen to the sound
    As my soul begin
    To speak…..only to u….
    Flesh to flesh haven’t touch
    But the spirits have meet
    As they engage in dis
    Love affair…foreseen eye
    Wonder of a gift…..
    uplifting........
    ur love search me
    embraced me in
    and swept me
    off my feet....
    mental grappin
    soul yearnin..
    spirit dancin..
    as u took hold….
    u knew I was the one…
    2 love u 4 u
    Refreshin to see loves
    For me this one last time…
    Not a trace of thy face…
    and stole my heart on sight
    my days r brighter…..
    in da night I wipe my tears
    threw away my fears…
    I know ur near….
    glance by chance
    Foreseen the vision
    Of u and I…the awaking of
    2 old souls..
    Climbin to be one..
    Love stuck I maybe
    But the power within me
    Allows me to love u
    More and more each day…
    u know my soul
    and feel my heart
    As u read my mind…
    lets intertwine…..
    sway to loves call
    side by side as we take off
    in flight into the night….
    Hold on tight…I think its time
    We both enjoy this ride…..
    of forever more.... :love:
    rain or shine...lovin you
    forever more......

    a blkangel thang....Angel
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    a lovely vision you painted
    keep on keep'n on sista
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful sis rain or shine sing it out
    very beautiful
    Peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rain or shine, for better or for worse, that's true love for ya. Feelin this wonderful imagery.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam...
    glad you likes..
    much love to yall...:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    rain of the love
    sprinkles in joy
    shine da light
    of hope and foreverness
    compassion dips
    flying aim high
    rain or shine
    dis was sweet and divine
    wow !!
    what a lovin heart u pose
     
  7. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was love...

    Rain,sleet,hail,lavastorms....
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :angel1: loved this one!!!! :heart:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ ....thanks it was posed from the heart..glad ya likes

    PositiveMindset and caramelpython
    thanks glad yall enjoyed my little poem of love...
     
  10. angelicsage

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    as always...your work radiated with passion!
    lovely flow!
     
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