Quiet Poetry Lounge : RAIN ON MY PARADE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 25, 2005.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEE IF I CARE!
    It's not the first time you've rained
    Rain and pour till your raindrops dissapear
    and you can rain on my parade
    till i'm drenched with ya dew
    you can stomp around gladly
    SO PROUDLY
    thought you had me
    keeping me unglued
    and you can rain on my parade
    i glady except your invite
    two wrong definately don't make it right
    well, i've had about all that I can take from you
    so bring it on
    cuz i'm on to you
    give me your best shot
    I know what i'm bout to do
    this one's 'bout to get caught
    i don't care what you do
    so you can rain
    you can hail
    you can thunder
    you can snow
    you can storm
    you can overflow
    you can freeze up into into hell
    you can throw a fit
    cuz i'm standing right here
    with my foot down
    my head held high
    and I have no fear
    so you can rain as hard as you can
    till i'm up to my ears
    you can see if i'm going down
    but i'm not leaving from here
    not going to change
    or march to anybody's tune
    not going to run
    so you can rain on my parade
    cuz raining is what you do best
    you can stomp up and down these halls one more time
    ILL STAND YOUR TEST!
    THIS IS WHEN I'M AT MY BEST
    CHALLENGE ME IF YOU WILL
    BUT THIS WILL BE MY THRILL
    JUST KEEPING IT REAL!
    you can rain
    and my parade just going be right here
    i'm singing it out
    strong loud and proud
    now it's my turn

    I THINK I RULE YOU

    O
    U
    T
    !
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tell it like it tis right here say it all !!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Show em who's boss poet, your thunder is stronger than that rain. I was feeling this piece, definitely.
     
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    to desert storm...

    and let the chuuuurch say amen amen amen somebody.:hearts3: :hearts4:
     
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    Quote-you can freeze up into into hell
    you can throw a fit
    cuz i'm standing right here

    Reply-Thats was nice
    The raint shall not hold you down
    Preach
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    guys , gotta tell you sumptin, after i wrote this poem. my brother called the house cuz he threw a party for a friend at our apartments club house, and some young dudes came in and crashed the set. it was so stupid, they stole some cds and did some other stupid things. anyhow we called the po po and told them they had to go. so but it was kinda weird after that, anyhow glad u enjoyed i thought the poem could have been more descriptive with poetic juice but other than dat, i'm glad y'all felt me. thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime when it rain like dat it pours u know everything falls apart
     
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    Amen

    :great:
     
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