Black Poetry : Rain on me

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The
    Rain
    falls upon me,
    drenching my soul
    and filling my
    cup
    endlessly;
    in the
    heat of this
    moment
    I
    Am
    free...
    To be....
    what I want
    as far as the
    eye
    can see.
    My
    emotions are
    appeased,
    I exude a
    special motion
    that your
    understanding
    seizes.
    We
    are pleased,
    my heart and I
    when the
    rain
    soaks my
    earth
    so
    pleasantly.
    And in her special
    sunshine I am
    made to
    shine
    with the brightness
    of 1000 suns
    and the potency
    of a bushel of
    rhymes.
    We are so
    divine
    when the rain falls.
    So...
    please...
    rain...
    on...
    me....

    Rain.......

    Copyright 2004 A.D/ "Earth Song Inc.'
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    feeling the fresh vibes
    from your drop
    very nice
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    NICE Piece
    I like the flow and
    the vibe speaks of renewel
    at least that is what I feel from this.
    I like that a lot
     
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    Feeling the flow of the rain, serene piece here.
     
  5. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all so much. I appreciate the love. God bless.
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    very nice scribe my sister, allowing the rain to wash away the dirt and the pains. :thanks: 4 the read
     
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    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Python. I'm blessed to have you all around me like no other. lOL by the way i'm a dude. *smile*
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    :hammer: oops sorry bro... tight anyway!
     
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