Black Poetry : rain drops fall…..pt1

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Faded to gray Spiralin
    in to the black hole…
    clouds took over the sky
    and the sun went away
    as the storm passed
    it started a rage…….
    There lays a black rose….
    Rain come down
    As it showers the being
    It burns the soul for the pain
    Cries for release……
    Turning and turning
    With in the sands of time
    He walk in and graced my love
    Felt my essences….
    rain drops fall
    as I take this walk…….
    To the music of my heart
    As he blaze my soul reaching
    And yearnin as he greets me
    In a dance
    rain drops fallin……..
    His body movin in vibe
    with mine…as we dance this dance
    within time as it turns….
    rain drops fall…..to be continued.....
    when i pick my pen back up
    Peace Angel
     
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    (singing) I wanna go outsiiiiide in the raaiiin.

    Liking it.
     
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    Very haunting and expressive...flow on...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said dis was rainy to a heart
    like dis one
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PositiveMindset ..sing my brother...lol..glad you likes

    watzinaname ...haunting ..naw..the love took the pain as she walks towards
    the light of love....thankz

    $RICH$$..rainy to the heart...ok... glad you likes the read...thankz

    Cindy...in deep glad you enjoyed thanks


    Peace my fam
    thankz for the support
    Angel
     
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