Quiet Poetry Lounge : Rain….of wonder thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Feb 22, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Still here waiting….
    In the rain….
    It blew me out the
    water and dried me off
    See I am still here waiting
    For the love to return
    Out of the blue it came….
    Wrap me up in a
    forever fairy tale
    And release me in the
    Essence of a sweet dream…
    As I am still here waiting
    In the rain….see I don’t
    want to share…
    Just a sweet love of my own…
    Is what I am waiting for……
    Closing my eyes and wishing….
    :love: ………..AS…………. :love:
    He came out the blue….
    Pulled me up..spoke sweet words
    Took my hand
    And made me his on…..
    In the rain I waited so long
    And he came….like a prince
    In the night….vow of his love
    And holds me tight
    Protects my heart
    and erases the pain
    For my love is here…..
    No longer waiting in the rain…
    For a new love was born….
    As we shape our foundation
    And build upon……
    I waited so long now I got
    My vision so clear….
    Believe me it’s a thing of wonder
    A touch of perfection
    His sweet love roams
    My veins….he posed that rose….
    And I forever hold…
    Just us two and some kids…
    Hmmmm maybe one on the way
    thats part of us…well just a thought
    roaming.....but I tell
    you how it ends up
    because…hmmmmm
    I am still waiting in the rain :wink:

    a blkangel thang....2004
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely flow sister Angel
    very nice
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Raining a stream of wonderful thoughts, very nice.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the support on dis
    peace
    Angel
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    waiting in the rain...oh the sound of water...
    rain cleanses the soul, so continue to...S-P-L-A-S-H :laugh: :laugh:
    very, very nice piece, continue your flow...



    luv to ya...queentswana
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana..thanks for the love on dis
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    nice piece. Girl I hope you won't have to wait in the rain too long. :love:
     
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