Black Poetry : ragin the cage

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    undefinedI'm the passions you try to cage
    Lurking deep from the light of the mind
    When austerity reigns, I'm the voice of rage
    The light of reason can never bind
    I existed before the first Biblical page
    I am the bass elements of mankind

    I'm the bass elements of mankind
    The raw passions reason can't cage
    **** the social theories you put on page
    I pound like Zeus's thunder in the mind
    No cage you make could ever bind
    My passions that forever rage

    Chaotic, churning seas forever rage
    Showing the true nature of mankind
    No artificial dams can bind
    Desires you want to cage
    Break free from the boundaries of the mind
    Words I write transcend the page

    Rise like Jesus, transcend the page
    Fly with the Phoenix in red hot rage
    Run carnal saturnine rings around the mind
    Ungridlocking locked coils of mankind
    Melting clear steel, opening the cage
    Cells for the flesh no longer bind

    Cells for the flesh no longer bind
    Words I write on page
    Steppin' swift outside the cage
    Comin' with the wolf packs howling in rage
    Divin' deep in pools of mankind
    Deeper than the anger that stays on my mind
    Puts a purple haze on my mind
    Clouds thoughts in a tight lipped bind
    'Cause that's the nature of mankind

    That I put on page
    Submerging white sheets in black-inked rage
    Deconstructing the cage

    Mind supremacy ends on my page
    Binding flesh no longer than rage
    Mankind's passions won't fit the cage :argue:
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    sho nuff right here da mankind mind can't be cage down
    da spirit & mind freely moving cross da page flow on !
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I would just like to see someone try to cage your emotions as they flow out onto the page, lol. I could envision the emotions flowing, your words are powerful.
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi tha Hookupman :wave: ...
    and welcome with the warmest of hearts to the set, very pleased to have you aboard the train.
    This is an awesome piece...I enjoyed reading it, you got it going on.
    looking forward to more.
     
  5. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    that "bass element" was walking, striding, bowing, and plucking..
    that bass element the cornerstone of the trio...
    rage on...play on and rage
     
  6. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    POWERFUL :bomb: :hot: :bomb: :hot:


    This piece was very powerful

    I enjoyed it
    *****Monad.poetress
     
  7. triniti424

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    mmmmm indeed cant be held down at all...
    welcome back brotha :wave:
    you have been missed :)
    look forward to hearing your scribe LIVE and in LIVING color :)
    The man with the deep house flava :)
     
  8. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a strong piece my brother...
    very, very, very, very strong...

    it appears that you have the hookup when it comes to writing skillz...

    keep bringin' 'em...
     
  9. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    THANK U TO ALL

    :angel1: It’s a strain mentally to translate indescribable feelings into words
    Can only try my best to explain it
    :uzi:
     
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    this was a very powerful piece cant wait to hear you read this one!!!!
    on fire flow head on!!!
     
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