Black Poetry : RAGE

[Hiclass_female]

Its coming from inside, tearing me apart
making it seem as if I have no heart
erupting like a volcano
nobody knew when to come or when to go
thought it was my little secret
but my ex wouldn't let me keep it
hidden away from all other aspects of my life
always causing heartache and strife
when all I want to do
is be the sweet litte person you knew
but it grew
grew
and grew
until I realized what I had at stake
is about to take
an early break
in which I'm not prepared to make
wondering when will be my next outbreak
wondering how much more you will take......
I'm invaded by this stranger
in danger
of this demon called ANGER!

 

[SwtT]

boy, i can feel you soo much on this it's scary

 

[angelicsage]

the energy in this piece...
leaps from the page, it's
as if you can feel the emotion
urging forth...the exact way
it feels when you become angry...
you captured this perfectly...
this was tyte...

 

[Hiclass_female]

SwtT/Angelicsage: Thank you so much for the kind words. I am also a big fan of you both.

 

[krazelyricks]

This was def. I was feelin' it. The feelings in it was most definitely felt. Anger, I teel ya it does get to you. Much love hiclass for thie tyte piece.