Black Poetry : Rage Defined

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rage Defined

    An erupting volcano
    with a never ending lava streams
    A pitbull strapped with weights
    an anger like you've never seen
    Car crashing, symbolizing conflicts of interest
    Gang fights in the park, my minds civil unrest
    The father of the raped daughter
    Getting his hands around a rapist throat
    Death, thats minute, Hanging, thats so remote
    Minor cuts, submerge in alchohal
    A burning, so unimaginable
    You at the end of a pistol, a fear so unfathomable
    Cant you picture the snapping of bones
    Pain, pressure, anger gone wrong
    My rage is defined and it carries many differnt effects
    Mind submerge in tention, anger makes me forget
    A worldwind of thoughts, never a good nights rest
    Rage keeps me wide awake, bashing heads is my test
    A mental assault rifle, ready to take aim
    wild lion, in the city, unable to tame!

    Unfin.
    Lj
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you...
    Rage has a way of
    taking all of your energy
    killing your dreams and
    replacing them with
    the images you've
    placed before us...

    flame on poet...
    Sage
     
  3. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    u mad aint u playa...lol...tight flow ..hell im mad now...lol... :flamet: it was hot lava rocks!!!...hookup
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks for the read
    just a little reliever
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    dig that this was tight...do it up now release and relax this was awesome
     
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    You let the emotions flow, I could almost see that rage exploding. Such menacing images...tight flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt I can hear all da emotions cascading out from dis one
    speak on
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What you just laid out...goes without saying, and I won't say, ...for we know.
    this piece was well said and taken...speak on poet, I'm listening.
     
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    The rage gets on my last nerve, the page must be turned ~

    Interesting read...
     
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