Black Poetry : R U THE ONE?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by guttapoetfromny, Feb 1, 2005.

  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    R U THE ONE?

    If I promise to love you til death do us part,
    then will you love me through sickness and health,
    promise to love me forever and always,
    unconditionally?

    If I chose to think with my heart and not with my brain,
    Will u choose to do the same?
    Will you protect me
    and never hurt me?

    Make me laugh
    but never make me cry,
    make me smile
    but never frown nor sigh?

    If so
    then you’re the guy for me,
    my love
    my past and future
    my soul mate. :luvv:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    R U THE ONE was beautifully done ~
     
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    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful scribe, i could feel the emotion in this piece. keep inkin' em

    Lyr1c
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte flow felt all the deepness of ya expression
    flow on !
     
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    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx alot :hearts2: