Black Poetry : r e vision

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hypersleep, Mar 30, 2001.

  1. hypersleep

    hypersleep Member MEMBER

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    If I had the strength
    to withstand the trilogy of
    your phosphorous luminescence, your
    substantial waves of presence
    and your incandescence,
    I could live with you.

    But better yet
    tease the tantric truths of
    sense and sensibilities by
    withholding the enigmas of the senses.

    Meet the other
    and only let the voice bathe
    my soul into submission.

    Let darkened rooms provide the light
    of inexplicable beauty.
    Sure friends can look at pictures
    or even meet us to verify our beauty,
    but no face to face
    with vision.
    let's remake
    vision.

    Let our hearts see,
    let our minds focus on the
    images our curves present to
    one another.
    We'll stay soul to soul.
    Communiques will volley
    back and forth with no barrier.
    a furious sweaty life alone from
    the world but crowded with passion
    in the dark.

    Folks will marvel at us,
    beauty blindfolded at the wedding,
    kissed with eyes closed,

    Will I'll say
    "when i look at you" ?
    no. I'll say
    When I see IN you.

    and to those shaking heads
    we'll say
    "it's a soul thang,
    you wouldn't understand"
     
  2. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u lil' devil!

    no they wouldn't understand it...
    no...
    they can't understand it all...

    this is something only we will ever know :)
    and that's the way it should be...
    just u and me


    *blowing kisses in the form of raindrops*
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hyper,

    Man o' Man!!! What ya tryna do up in here fella??!!??

    This is a sensational piece!!!

    Keep tight your hyper flow!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  4. hypersleep

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    thanks gq & dnomm

    yall have shown me much love
     
  5. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    repost

    jus had 2!
     
  6. 8th wonder

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    OH MY...........
    TEARY EYED...
    This piece speaks to me deeply..

    If only people could
    see me
    without seeing me
    the complex would begin to fade
    people would see the real wonder before them
    not the face...
    not the shell.....
    the wonder..

    ~conciously competent~

    thanks hypersleep, tyght as ever...

    8th Wonder!
     
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