Black Poetry : Quoted by one, Felt by all.

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I never knew you could break my heart
    You said that we would be 1
    always, from the start
    soon it became sour, very tart
    I came in the relationship
    Not about play
    But it seems that it was all about that
    From the first day.
    But love resurrected me
    And showed me the light
    There are some questions I don't understand
    And just could not fight
    How could you do this to me?
    What wrong have I do you?
    There's nothing, nothing for you I wouldn't do.
    And you do this to me!!! Tell me it couldn't be true.
    How dare you!!!
    How dare you use love's name in vain!!!
    And you look at me, with that same blank expression
    on your face.
    But thats okay.
    Love has resurrected me, and as
    Dave Hollister says,
    "GIRL I GOTTA GO. I CAN'T STAY.
    YOU SAY THINGS HAVE CHANGED.
    BUT GIRL THINGS ARE STILL THE SAME."
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Feeling your scribe. I,ve been there too! Thank God that time can heal ones pain. nice scribe! keep bringing It!!
     
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    tight flow!!
     
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    felt ya from tha page.... sometimes luv sticks... but if ya hang in there and don't sink... it helps ya float to a better destination...
    liked ya flow...

    peace
     
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    very tyte flow. im feelin it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved dis here ...........say it again !
    tyteeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    YEs oh yes you speakin truth up in here
    Keep doin da dayum thang!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes it is felt by all...excellent title!

    Express yourself and tell it like it is, and sooner or later you will get what you give...a love that is true and stands the test of time and there will never be unanswered questions in your mind. Your flow is tight and your concept is great...and I hope some lucky lady finds out before it's too late...

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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