Black Poetry : Quiproquo ......"'laesie""

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Opressive lies the feeling....
    on a place where manny can not come...
    One is from the assumption that all is well...
    all is ok...
    As good furniture makers they give you...
    a pleasant seat......
    Simplistic they give you the feeling that they dont fall short....
    but at the same time they give you a rebus...
    that makes you tarry...
    ivent and forfeit....

    Tenacity for fear and desolation...
    is the creeping source of grief...
    that makes the love shout down...

    only the Second kan bring him or her in safety and security..

    They often choose for the soloist in the Love Duet....

    Replacant to Replacant...
    a regressive reincarnation...
    Rendez-vous on Rendez-vous...

    Inexpressible much love they have for .....love...
    but germinate rarely in love...
    and their meeting with real love....
    becomes hampered.....

    reseave less...

    beceause they think they are not worth it ...
    because of their behaviors ..
    wich often causes situations that hurts others...
    mumble their treu feelings...
    or speak them out in their..

    ""monastery heart""





    Only the lord and his love...
    can come with his lancet ...
    on places where "'he "' or "'she"' ..
    him or her have left....

    cause you can not come there....

    forget it...

    The kick of the tormentor has stunned him or her..
    and it is annoying the soul with an injury....

    Dont go and play the hero..


    but be love ...



    a silent prayer..





    Dont go and hang youre prizes in the air...
    of youre sacrifices...
    Cause they never got trough..
    they wont...




    Only the holy sacrifice of jezus....


















    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully pose'd sis.....speak on !
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The thing about the Lord's love is that everybody is worthy of it, even when we don't think we are worthy of love. So nice to read something new from you.
     
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    Very nice poet
    Love this piece
     
  5. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Piece...thanx 4 sharing

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for telling like it is like the way it flowed , flow on poet,
     
  7. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam:heart:








    God is good ....









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