Black Poetry : Quills - Can I Make You Wet?

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby can I make you wet? Can I so inspire you that the creative juices locked inside of you are unleashed. As if they have been bound for a thousand year eternity the spring forward from the touch of my quill. Can I flip out your mind and send you on a psychedelic trip that only a true poetic progenitor might explore? If I dipped my quill into your inkwell and trust with passion and stroked with syncopation, the membranes of your orifice of orgasmic flow, would you explode into a tremor of poetic delight? Would you, if tapped that ink well?

    Would the points of my passion, the pressure of my points so inspire you to scream from your very soul the essence of an ejaculatory, orgasmic, su-per-cali-fragil-istic-ex-pi-al-i-do-coius, verse that cause both you and I to sway the crowd, the crowd you’d say ‘cause I touched the place, that once was safe and unleashed a sleeping queen of verse, a Nubian quillite that would cause the crowd to rise and fall at voices call and we would cum simultaneously, synchronically, and we’d leave the carpet of our emotional experience soaked ‘cause your well took my quill? Ohhhh - a poetic thrill – poetic delight!

    Or maybe through me coming to the entrance and yet not fully penetrating your innermost soul, we could build an anticipation that would so cause you to gyrate and dip your hips to a beat that has not come to full rhythm but yet you find a rhythm – a rhythm of rhyme, a beat of beats, that beat my drum and drum my beat and ink well creates a lyrical masterpiece that drips juices so rhythmically complete that I sway to your beat, and weak becomes my knee, and my heart beats, I pant of passion of passion I pant and my head spins 360 degrees in an exorcistic experience that draws the last hint of my poetic spirit from me. The quintessence of we poetry!

    Can I pen a discourse of intercourse on your white satin sheets with my bald point pen, my quill, your thrill as our lines cross -across the boundaries of exotic, erotic thought and flip the script from front to back, back to front, with twisted-slamming bodies of verse, line after line, from bottom to top, line upon line, after line after line, a story-line immersed in a collaboration of the masculine and feminine voice vibin’ in our masuc-femininity as you become quill and I become your sweet sheet as and you scribe my master-piece as we pen a page of euphoric poetic essence.

    **** Poet! You’re dripping! Baby shall we write?
     
  2. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This One Does It To Me Everytime!

    My brutha!!! What can I say? This is some top notch shyznit!
    Too hot for words, I can't even reply to that!
    :toast: :hot: :uzi: :flamet: :hot:
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOoooooooooot

    **** my brutha!
    This is too tyte!
    What am I supposed to say other than
    good work poet.
    Love this!
    Thanks.
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** it !

    I had to read it again.
    Hope ya don't mind poet!
    This is so hot!
     
  5. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm being drawn to these erotic flows...

    and I cain't hep myself! This is tooooo incredibly hottttttt!
    (you making me feel like I'm doin somethin nasty in my mama house and stuff!!!!)

    Keep writing!!!! "WEEEEEEEEEEEEE POETRY"!!!!
    SWT
     
  6. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks FAM. let's keep it HOT!!!!
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I keep reading this...

    Write on, baby write on!!!!!!:hot: :hot:
    Loving this piece for sho'!
    E