Quiet Poetry Lounge : Quietly

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Phenomenon, Dec 23, 2005.

  1. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautiful love performs quietly
    The passion fills a heart’s empty void
    Loving quietly doesn’t mean loving secretly
    What’s created genuinely can never be destroyed

    Through silence, progress is accomplished
    No need to worry about destructive characteristics
    People’s jealousy that starts, has already finished
    This dream has confessed that it’s truly realistic

    Our love establishes a daily fashion
    The quietness allows us to discover pure happiness
    Without worldly noise, I levitate to satisfaction
    Maintaining greatness through pain that’s relentless

    Turning our backs away from selfish motivation
    What we have can’t stop being mutual
    Fate is a destiny that travels in circulation
    Around and around, no logical, only spiritual and emotional

    What’s built patiently
    Becomes too strong to die
    To the clueless, love remains a mystery
    But to us it’s a natural high

    Affection shares truth in quiet ways
    And with every touch the heart glistens
    When you embrace, there’s the most beautiful song that plays
    And all you have to do is closely listen
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    quiet moment
    this was divined
     
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    i like your poem. Feels like peace to me
     
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    Yes, there was a serene feel to this piece. Enjoyed your flow.
     
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    very nice, really this is a good write
    _Passion_
     
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    this poems appears to be calm and quite relaxing. love the way this poem flows, flow on poet.:star:
     
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    very endearing
     
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    I'm reading Woman thou art loosed, by TD Jakes (its so much more than just the movie). And I am so amazed how this piece captures so much of what that book talks about. Goosebumps.
     
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    this was very moving enjoyed the flow of this.:kiss1:
     
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