Quiet Poetry Lounge : Quiet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jul 18, 2002.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I need dis moment
    I need my tyme
    I need the space
    to used my mind

    I'm not blind
    I did no crime
    only wish u was mines

    as i give birth
    to my thoughts
    i need dis tyme
    to relax and unwined

    working da myths
    doing what i can
    trying to be free
    to bring u things to see
    build from the floor
    I stand beyond da door
    set on sights
    4 a whole lot more

    so i search
    I wonder
    i plea with grace
    from the look on my face
    only my GOD
    knoweth of my faith

    something can't be traced
    but u see da smile
    outta place
    i need dis space
    thee very moment
    of tyme
    before da dayz ova
    my heart will shine
    in due tyme
    no one will be blind
    to my rythm & rhyme
    in my own quiet tyme

    I NEED DIS TYME
    I NEED MY SPACE
    I NEED TO COLLECT
    AND RE-DIRECT
    MY PLACE
    KEEPIN' DA FAITH .....:(
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    fallin 2 darkness

    poetic search))))))
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QUIET TIME IS ALWAYS NEEDED THERE ARE MANY THINGS TO BE HEARD IN OUR SILENCE.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES NOW I SIT IN MY SPACE OF QUIET TYME
     
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    alone in dis room to finish da story
    in my own tyme zone
     
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    quiet time is always need lay the mind still
    hear your thoughts as your soul begins to speak
    i really enjoyed this glad i found it
    Peace and love my Richie Rich
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we need that quiet, peaceful time to collect our thoughts and just be. I like the way you brought this, direct.
     
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    yes it's dat time .....thankz angel

    thank u watz.... indeed we all need this time at some point
     
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    gotta have my down time
    to collect the thoughts that
    have scattered about my mind
    to settle and think
    to resolve and decide
    to talk to god
    because I need to confide
    need my peace
    no chatter up in here
    recharge my battery
    shake loose the fear
    stand back and
    leave me alone
    by and by
    I'll come back home
     
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    inside my chambers
    inside my mind
    i need my quiet tyme
    to think of things
    and fulfill a dream
    keep my sanity
    and my humanity
    i need my space
    rest deep in dis place
    so i can hear da moments
    so i can taste the feat
    as GOD work on me
    allow me the pleasure
    and all cost and meassure
    in the quiet tyme
    i find peace like a lost
    treasure
    shhhhhh! allow me
    dis space
    my moment
    the place
    my tyme
    quiet !

    Thankz sistah gempis that was a lovely flow back
     
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