Black Poetry : Quiet time

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quiet time
    To think and drift away….
    In a day dream
    you where near….
    in the sun rays my tears dry
    but the night falls again
    and the salty rain comes
    all thru the night
    inside burn as my
    soul yearns
    and heart pours
    quiet time begins…..
    tension within tension
    as the worries of us…
    seems to build..
    sittin inside a day dream
    screamin out your name…
    dayum don’t you hear?
    as I look up you fade
    away within this dream
    left alone ashame and hurt…
    lookin for my quiet time
    in hush you was there
    then out of sight…
    as I fight with my mental
    I begin to pray
    what am I to do
    feelin pain
    feelin sorrow
    no longer singin
    invisible to ones eye
    Quiet time
    To think and drift away….
    Upon the starz into the air I go…
    Thoughts droppin
    Roamin about blindly
    Not understanding….
    As another part dies
    Tryin to hold on…
    But the day dream starts to end…..
    Break it all the way down
    Why you do what you did to me?
    If you meant not to stay…to
    Fill your words….
    In a rush it went
    not a word spoken
    not even a whisper
    just dip and go
    cold in heavens arms
    black in the skies
    starz don’t shine
    and the sun light hides…
    as my heart drops out….
    Quiet time
    To think and drift away….
    Knowin I loved you Until
    The end….and I still do….
    In a hush I took my last breath
    To think and drift away….

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    2004
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    a heartfelt piece this is...
    emotions poured on da page
    valentines day has a way
    of doing it to some folks...tyte
    one love
    khasm
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the reply...
    support is great
    Peace and love
    to u both
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep scribe here
    wow !!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da reply.....Rich
    yor support is great
    Peace
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    sssshhhhhhh quiet my people an angel has spoken.... so so beautiful. :eek:
     
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    feeling the peace in your flow
    much love to you
    Peace
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    thanks my fam for the love and support on dis one
    Peace Angel
     
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