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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Massive str8 scribe
    deep heated vibe
    held in heavy tides
    where my love reside
    i can't no longer hide
    the emotions
    of this sweet devotion
    under this explosion
    of embrace as i trace
    yo humble face and place
    u in the depth of my
    reason of completion

    Now this hour glass stain
    tappin at my brain
    tryin to keep my sane
    i blame not but seek within
    yo everlasting my beloveth
    on the journey call love

    A piece of me rest on the
    stilliness of tonight as i float
    into tomorrow's bliss of this
    obyss i lone your rapture
    that has been created in my
    heart & soul where i treasure
    it in eternality

    Quietly
    within a
    fading
    storm
    slowly
    I am ...


    Dyamondluv 2005
    Nu~wave Creation
    AllRights Reserved
    $R
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lines like these:
    "i can't no longer hide
    the emotions
    of this sweet devotion
    under this explosion
    of embrace as i trace
    yo humble face and place
    u in the depth of my
    reason of completion"
    make a heart melt with each word. This was brimming with emotion, and it over flowed. Sweeter than sweet brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true dat big thankz for the loving words happy
    those few lines was felt within......
     
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    Well, not just those few lines, they were just representative of why I enjoyed the entire piece. You're quite welcome.
     
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    big thankz sista watz ......
     
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    you know how to get me dont you? now stop that wheeew you have a sista over hur packing her uhaul lol i am so feeling this mood love it!!!!
     
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    lol..... pack on up and move to the high rise glass house
    thankz happy u felt the bliss sista Angel
     
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    on my way suga bear.................
     
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    this was fiya...
     
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    thankz Angel cakes hurry up womannnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!

    thankz prizefighter for this warm love u give
     
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