Quiet Poetry Lounge : Quiet storm X factor pt.1

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Rain tongue speaking softly

    I behold thee
    yet i'm no more then
    yesterday
    I have lived in da storm
    too long
    before me my eyez wit in tear
    for i am not
    I would have drown twice
    Just for you
    If i could have covered my steps
    i would not have been found
    to be tormented
    in my final ink upon miserable paper
    stained as it dry to it's end
    my heart is eaten by da cares
    and striped by love
    inside i become nothing but an image
    as i fly away to no more
    my soul calls da spirit in
    as we dwell back into an cocoon
    within da chambers of slumber
    while da quiet storm continues
    it out pour upon me .
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    was

    a love lost here?

    you called this "quiet storm"

    but it is a very intense quiet storm

    :teach:
     
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    You are no more than your future and no less than you past. your coccoon is nothing but a cast. You will heal stronger and better and you will be able to love like you have never loved before.
     
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    It one of them storms that's quiet but makes a big impact as i shift to safty
    U know how worldwinds are just spining twisting and hitting ....Thankz so'ja

    lovealexandria......That is so true yes i learn to go deeper to show my love
    a love no one has ever seen in this life time.....Thank you sister dearly.
     
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    Even when storms are quiet, they have a strong impact. Well written scribe Admin Rich.
     
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    yes watz it really does pack a punch ......sometime i just don't know !
     
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