Black Poetry : Quiet Reflection

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just want—
    to take you in
    slowly…
    wholly allowing your
    rare sweetness to
    wondrously wash
    over me…
    unconditionally
    control me…
    so that I can see
    how deep
    your love can go…

    I just want—
    to know you
    absolutely…
    & hold you
    inside me…
    until I acquire
    inexhaustible access
    to your magnificent
    Black Man beauty…
    allowing me to
    unmistakably understand
    & immerse myself
    within your
    extraordinary essence…

    You get me that way.

    © SunshyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah GA!!!!

    This reflection is destined to bring about very nice pleasantries since it is sooo quiet!!! I like the silence in your serenity most def!!!!

    I'm diggin' ya quiet reflection ~ but what else is new?? ;)

    Peaceful piece!!!

    L&R
    GQ
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just take it easy.......

    Girl - you are sumthin' else; I like dis wun hea too!
    Simply breathtaking!!

    Hold it down girl, hold it down!!

    Simply Lovely...
     
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    PoeticMaster Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u r like the million rays of love
    shyne and flow on !
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You guys are soooo good to me...

    gq...
    i'm glad to see you here!
    thanks for the read... you
    know what your opinion means
    to me!! L&R~

    n2...
    noooo... sister dear!
    you are somethin' else!! :)
    thanks for showin' love...
    imma try to hold it down!!
    Peace&Love~

    PM (My Nubian Kang)...
    you are like... that thing
    i need to sustain me!! ;)
    you are my love... thanks
    for the constant support!
    AlwaysLove~
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No matter where you are, your scribe is fantabulous (yeah, that's a word...well I use it)

    peace and love
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb... you da man!

    thanks for the love...
    & i know it most definitely
    is a word... cause i use it
    too... right along with
    Fabulontay!! (seriously)

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

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    I KNOW, LEAVE IT TO LISTER TO BRING IT BACK UP, RIGHT? OFCOURSE...THIS PIECE IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL, DEAR FRIEND. I DON'T KNOW HOW I COULD OF MISSED IT, BUT I DID. LIKE THEY SAY, BETTER LATE THAN NEVER AT ALL.
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister. i don't know how you missed this one either... but i'm glad you took the tyme to read it!! i love this piece/peace... personally. thanks!... as always!
     
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    THE MOMENT OF SILENT!
    UMMMMM!! NOW I SIT HERE
    MY MIND RUNNING FREE..THANX
     
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