Black Poetry : Quiet Of The Storm

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The stillness of the water…
    Laid in quiet of the storm
    As the sunsets…..and
    the moon shows face
    starz twinkle…in da wind
    birds set afar sending
    sweet tunes that rides the wind….
    it flows thru the veins
    and place you
    in a bliss of delight
    peace over comes….
    the light shows brighter as
    heaven opens up its doors…
    And set the flow….

    Essence of it flowz the
    Air..within a desire that burns…
    And it begins to yearn
    To flame..the vision bliss
    upon a dream
    As it draws closer
    In da wind it goes
    Ridin in perfect harmony…..
    Singin a song of ummmm…

    Fire of desire
    Cries to go higher
    Within the extreme
    Pleasure of the flow…
    In a hush it rushes you
    In the storm…..
    As it unfolds and lay…
    The rare of the essence
    as love begins to flow.....
    In the quiet storm….

    a blkangel thang..... :angel1:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so very very pretty, my sister, very nice. the imagery really took me there
     
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    Nice Drop!

    Nice one, really nice! Enjoyed the imagery and the rhythm,
    and never knowing exactly where it was taking you ...like a
    seduction...Um hm! :blush:

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    Yes, the imagery does get us caught up in this flow...very nice.
     
  5. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nice....very nice. :D

    The Quiet Storm, huh? ;) :D

    :toast:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis thankz sis...glad ya likes

    msluciousb glad you enjoyed the read..thankz

    watzinaname....thank you

    Monetary....quiet storm what what?????lol glad ya likes..thanks

    thanks for the love and support fam
    Peace
    blkangel
     
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    this line was hot!
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    Fire of desire
    Cries to go higher
    Within the extreme
    Pleasure of the flow…
    In a hush it rushes you
    In the storm…..
    As it unfolds and lay…
    The rare of the essence
    as love begins to flow.....
    In the quiet storm….
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Loved the flo in this one indeed
     
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    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol quiet storm, it was nice and full of intensity.....
    I want more..keep it up!
    praise
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done sistah dis was full of emotions and whispers
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    caramelpython :thanks:
    rahstagal :thanks:
    $$RICH$$ :thanks:
    much love and peace to each of you
    thanks for the love.....Angel
     
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