Quiet Poetry Lounge : Quiet moments of us together

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Apr 9, 2003.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Finally at last
    after tyme has passed
    together alone
    in dis quiet moment
    a treasure of token
    warm wordz spoken
    our bodies mix
    in a perfect motion

    secrets shared
    truth we bared
    love committed
    dreams begun
    hearts enterwined
    as tyme shine
    in dis quiet moment

    compassionate bliss
    sweet luious kisses
    magic gentle touchies
    bodies clutchies
    tender embraces
    wordz unleashed
    to a shhhhhhhhhhhh!

    like hush hush !
    not a sound
    just a mix of sweet
    love found
    romantic romance
    under candle lite
    as our solo hearts
    takes it flyte
    so quiet

    all i heard was I :heart: U
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is nothing, like a sweet moment's embrace... Nice!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    wow , sounds like love has returned, in the right way, precious ...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    1poet...........indeed the warm embrace of two in the moment
    of tyme in a quiet space sharing
    Thankz 4 da read

    MORE........yes in full swing of love in the quiet tyme of da day
    Thankz coz u see how love flow
     
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    This is an absolutely beautiful piece
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in the moment of quiet tyme
    true love surely shine
    as i thank u from above
    allow me dreamer to say
    quiet secrets hearts shared

    movin in the quiet motion!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love is places like dis make ya heart beat rapidly
    and deep breath made wit smiles
     
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    Quiet places, Shared space. What a perfect time to embrace your loved one. beautiful! Rich
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi,

    Wonderfully written and beautfully expressed! I love the flow of this one. Gread read!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes purple the moment of tyme together alone makes
    the warmth so beautiful......

    sierra.....Thank u ....these are very rare but treasured moments .
     
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