Black Poetry : Quiet in da House

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time is sure standing....still

    Still the lights of the
    emoticons are flashing
    in rememberance
    of yesterday
    and the day prior

    Subliminal are the
    messages that
    affect my
    ability to
    think about
    writing...
    but
    writing in this
    peacefulness
    should be easy

    ...easy as breezes
    of a lover's embrace
    or quiet as a mouse
    moving effortless-ly
    throughout this
    storied place

    I'm wondering
    when will the lounge
    be filled with
    poetical drinkers
    of verbose bourbon's
    and scotch on the rocks
    of ink drops
    sips of
    long island iced tea
    with cypher's held
    ready to scribe
    making lots of
    noise or
    dances with
    art lyrically
    lifting each others'
    spirits
    ...and all of the
    love shown in the
    form of replies
    from family members
    whom many of
    us have never even
    seen or personally met
    but appear as close
    to one another
    through
    proses of poetry

    But for now it's
    Quiet in da House~~
    and I feel like I'm
    standing here
    looking out of the
    windows observing
    the absence of
    scenery
    Holding myself
    for comfort's sake
    waiting...
    watching...
    waiting...
    listening... in anticipation
    to hear the sound of the door bell
    ...ring...ring...

    For that is when
    the poetic laureates
    who also
    dwell in this house
    will return
    home


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK....

    :wave: Sure feels good to be home!
    Nice poem N2!
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jyntl~

    Welcome home, where ya' been?! :D

    Thank you for the read...

    One luv.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    N2

    BABY GURL I LOVE YA
    U KNOW THAT!
    U SAY DEM WORDS K POET!:heart:
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Awwwww you're too much ~ thank you for the love....
    I Luvs U 2
    baby!!


    One.
     
  6. MzNappi

    MzNappi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetry in motion

    this is the most memeorable line for me

    and I feel like I'm
    standing here
    looking out of the
    windows observing
    the absence of
    scenery

    there are golden words in your pen

    i enjoyed this much
     
  7. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the peaceful sound of...

    nothingness

    disturbed by the

    gracefulness

    of poetical drinkers

    who gave toast to the thinkers

    of

    the

    flow.

    i raise my glass to you

    in thanks

    and

    much love

    for being you.


    THANK YOU.
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your words are nfinite...

    i have some peeps who will enter the portal of poetry soon.....
    be on the look out.
    for afterwards you will demand peace and quiet
    when they bring poetic riot, trust.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I FEEL SO WARM

    WHEN I CAN GET N2 UR SOUL
    AND READ POETRY OF MOTION
    YA WORDS REACH OUT AND TOUCH
    THANK U :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I told you I was going to get all my replies iin before I left. So with tha said I must say this...This is magnificent, marvelous, and poetically mystic. N.G. or S.S. ? What are your real initials?

    one love,blak
     
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