Quiet Poetry Lounge : quick verse I

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poetic_scrolls, Aug 18, 2006.

  1. poetic_scrolls

    poetic_scrolls Member MEMBER

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    satisfied by the thirst that hurt made me feel.
    i promised myself that i won't be concealed.
    locked up in bondage,
    by those hated biggoted eyes.
    i fought depression-deception-and sympathetic cries.
    why?
    because when all was said and done,
    i was just somebody that was a no one...
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Poetic_scrolls
    Welcome , welcome to our home, keep bringing the poetic wisdom, we're here and listening...thanks for the drop.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome!!!
    Keep it flowing and you are somebody.

    Much luv
     
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    Excellent piece. I'm moved:)
    :welldone:
    :picture:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhh yes welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above blessing this some love
     
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