Black Poetry : QUICK VENT RIGHT HERE NOW

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BLASTHEME, Jan 9, 2009.

  1. BLASTHEME

    BLASTHEME Active Member MEMBER

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    I JUST POSTED UH WRITE...
    KATS STARTED ANTAGONIZIN LIKE THEY WANTED UH FIGHT
    ASKIN MYSELF DO THEY REALLY SEE THA LIGHT
    MY COMPOSURE REMAINS LOOSE BUT HOMIEZ MY SKILLZ ARE TITE
    I'M VERBAL TURBO HYDRO-SONIC WHEN I MOVE WIT SPEED
    SO UNIQUE AN ENTITY THAT I CAN KNOWLEDGE YOU SIMPLY WITH AIR I BREATHE
    FIST-FIGHTS RARELY ACCOMPLISH ANYTHING AT ALL
    SO I CONDITIONED MY MENTAL TO LEAVE OPPONENTS SIMPLY STALLED
    MESMORIZED AS IF THEIR LIFE-TIME SIMPLY PAUSED
    THEY MEMORIZE THEIR LINES I FREE-STYLE SIMPLY WITHOUT FLAWS
    ANALYZE MY ANNIHILATION THEY'RE SHREDDED SIMPLY LIKE COLE SLAW
    NOW THAT'S UH BOLD CLAUSE, I'M GIFTED LIKE MR. CLAUSE
    MATE I'M STRAIGHT OUTTA PHILLY AN BELIEVE ME I'M COLD RAW
    IN THIS PSEUDO-LISTIC WORLD OF ENVY, JEALOUSY AN HATE
    I PREFER TO REMAIN "ME" NEVER CARING ABOUT UH RATE
    UNLESS IT'S THA RATE OF MY PAY, 8 DIGITS MAKES MY DAY
    I"M NOT IN LOVE WITTA DOLLAR, BUT "HIP HOP HOORAY!!" ON PAY-DAY
    KATZ GIT OVERZEALOUS AN WANNA PRESS THEIR LUCK
    MY PEN IS UH POISONED SHURIKEN, SO PLEASE DON'T GIT STRUCK
    THA FIRST THING IN UNDERSTANDIN ME IS SIM-PLY THIS
    DONT GIT ME PISSED... AN SIMPLY, ME, DON'T DIS
    THA SECOND THING IN UNDERSTANDIN ME IS THA SAME AS THA FIRST
    EXCEPT WHEN PRESSED TO THA LIMIT, OUT COMES THA "KILLER" VERSE
    THA THIRD THING IN COMPREHENDIN IS THAT THERE AINT NO THIRD!!
    GIT THOSE OTHER 2 TOGETHER, MEMORIZE EM AN THAZ MY WUURD!!!
    I ONLY STRIKE AT THOSE WHO OFFER TO STRIKE ME
    I GOT LOVE FOR MY PEEPZ WHO EITHER LUV OR LIKE ME
    I DON'T PRACTICE RECITIN' BUT I DO PRACTICE IS-LAM
    3RD PERSON, "BLASTHEME THA MENTAL MONOLITH, HE'S JUST LIKE HIS-MOM"
    PATIENT, CARING, PASSIONATE, AND COMPASSIONATE
    DRAMA, RUMORS, GOSSIP, MALEVOLENCE, I AIN'T HAVIN IT
    STICKIN TO THA SCRIPT GOD MADE UH WAY FOR HIS SON
    BLASTHEME THA LYRICAL SPIRITUALIST, NOW I'M DONE



    JUST UH QUICK VENT PIECE WRITTEN RIGHT HERE...15 MINUTEZ
    I POSTED ON ANOTHER SITE RECENTLY AN ENVY SHOWED ITS UGLY HEAD AND I STARTED TO SMASH IT INTO OBLIVION, BUT I REALIZED SOMETHING GREATER............
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It's cool vent / express and let it out .....I feel ya !
     
  3. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a way to vent poet. this was lyrically masterful. keep making it do what it do
     
  4. free2b_me

    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS WAS FELT ALL THE WAY ON THE WEST COAST!! THIS WAS HOT, WITH ALOT OF FIRE BEHIND IT!:em1500:
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    str8 raw

    i ain't mad at ya

    you told them what is was

    when you "press" your luck in the streets, and then somebody brings "pressure" that person wasn't prepared for........................it could get ugly

    feeling ya brethren
     
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