Black Poetry : Questions of heartstings

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I embrace your inhale
    With the slightest touch of
    A buttercup under your chin
    Illuminating your divine smile?

    Can I consume your vision with
    Dreams of joy wrapped in layers
    Of peace smothered in thick rich
    Folds of deep dark compassion?

    Will you allow me the chance to
    Wrap your heart in layers of silk
    And lace and place it in a chest
    Built from the desires held within?

    Will you return to me the rib taken
    Whence I was sleep to be molded
    into the virtuous epitome of one who
    fits snugly inside the new found home?

    And can we complete each others
    Walk as we hold hands while you
    inhale the love that I exhale when I
    release a sigh of peace being with you?
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D.


    this brings to mind a few of the lines
    from my "Breathe" piece... (i'll share) :D

    "i can sense love… wondrously
    whispering on the wind… & all
    i want is for you to breathe out—
    so that i… can breathe you in"

    (there you go doin' that calmin' thang again!)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This hea is tight dog!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    Man you're gonna need security...As I look out over the Sea of Love, I see all the ladies changing course, heading towards the garden.
     
  5. dnommo

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    :eeek: then do something bro' stop 'em!!! they might trample the tulips... :lol: thanks for the read bro'

    Thanks for the read Reason.

    and GA...there you go...all that heavy breathing can cause asthma...

    mad luv to ya...

    one.
     
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    thanks you all for the read
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SIR.D flying low coz ya gonna need help !

    Note to self )))) Dnommo shakin' grounds
    as he rope heartstrings around his finger
    tyght flow my brutha
     
  8. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (ducking) here poet...don't fly that low...you might bump one of these here ladies on the head. :lol:

    thansk for the read and protection bro...somedays i need it...
     
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