Quiet Poetry Lounge : Questions from a Real Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticnite, Feb 15, 2004.

  1. poeticnite

    poeticnite New Member MEMBER

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    I'm not like the young ladies who fall for game
    See I have learned to not settle for less
    I don't spend my time trying to look sexy for you
    My worth is not measured by the way that I dress
    Can you stop for a second and look past this body
    And see the soul that lies within
    Can you stop always trying to make love to me
    And simply just be my friend I am far from perfect by any means
    But I am far from ignorant too I know sometimes I can make mistakes
    And you may not like some things that I do
    But can you learn to love me in spite of my faults
    Can you love me for the woman I am
    Can you refuse to give yourself to anyone else
    Can you show me that you are a real man
    Will you take the time to give me poeticnites
    Will all my days be filled with love
    Can you truly make me see that you are the man
    That was sent to me from heaven above
    If you do those things I promise to you
    I will be all the woman you ever need
    I will be the Queen standing beside her King
    That’s the promise you have from me​
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, ask and you shall receive, lol, I just posted something about maybe you writing something new. This scribe also described real feelings about just wanting to be loved for your soul. I liked this.
     
  3. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okayyyy....let's hear it for the real ladiessssss
    This piece was definately worthy
    of 1snap up and 2 snaps down
    Sistahs... take note... :book:
    Keep doin' your thang Brother Poet...


    Much Peace,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dat's on da real well pose'd
     
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