Black Poetry : Question?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rashad, Mar 15, 2002.

  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time again to enter the realm
    of spiritual blessings from
    within scribing with my pen
    in the wind as it blows through
    the meadow softly but gently
    swiftly I gather my thoughts
    of today this moment to express
    the art of mind designed and
    inspired by God and other creative
    minds with gifts unimaginable by
    the average man...
    We stand to be claimed as individuals
    part of a people
    A heritage a culture of God ready
    to captivate the mind to elevate a
    higher awarness of self in the Spirit
    that God has given us
    Poetic Justice has taken over me
    Giving me the ability to be
    Free to express how I feel and
    deal with the issues of how we are
    raised as a society infinitely plagued
    with misrepresentation of our history
    deprived of our privacy
    unable to speak
    made weak in flesh due to sin
    Never have I seen such hyprocritical
    mean people in high positions on
    boards and committees in control
    of the city then don't care about
    the community
    Brotha's killing each other
    Babies having babies
    Unemployment on the rise
    Pollution in our skies
    Children ask the question
    Why?
    With a cold look in their eye
    ****!!
    Are we living in the Last Days?
     
  2. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woweeeeeeeeee...it is deep up in here this morning!

    tyte scribe, bru

    dee
     
  3. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lots of deep thoughts to be pondered
    in this. I'm feelin it though, and have the
    same questions you have. We have to
    believe that if these are our last days,
    that we will be lifted up in glory to be
    with our Master. Those who are not in
    tune with Him will be lost forever, even though
    it appears that for now, they have won.
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad.


    poetic justice has taken ova you... indeed! :)

    this piece/peace... i can dig! fa sho.
    i find myself looking around & asking the same
    Questions?... time&time again. thank you for
    giving a vibrant voice to my inner thoughts!

    (Write on lil brother... write on!! :D )

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The last days are upon us
    as sure as the sun shines
    its rays touching our fleshly frames
    the signs are being fulfilled
    day by day
    the writing is on the wall
    but it's not "mene mene tekel upsharin"
    but it says get your house in order
    for soon he shall crack the sky
    and gather his people home
    so the real question is
    Will you be ready?
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank yall!!

    Mizdee, it sure is deep up in here. I preciate ya taking time fo ya lil bruh!!

    Sunshyne, anytime my sista!!

    Dani, Amen to that!!

    Bishop, I hope so bruh!!

    :)
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go on Poet...scribe about the truth.
    We better get in check.

    Enjoyed the flow.


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN:heart:
     
  8. Depth

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    Deep flow.....indeed...
     
  9. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poet...open their minds constantly....

    tight scribe here...

    one.
     
  10. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!!

    D', always a pleasure to hear from you.

    Depth, Thanks for taking the time.

    Coco, I'm glad u enjoyed
    :) :)
     
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