Black Poetry : Question

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Skybeauty, Oct 31, 2007.

  1. Skybeauty

    Skybeauty Member MEMBER

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    Love
    Peace
    &
    Serinity

    As the sun reflects off the shore
    Kissing the waters ever so gently
    birds at play.....
    Summer air stroking the sand
    I soak my skin in the warmth of the earth and just look up to the skys
    Hopeing and wishing upon the beauty of the clouds
    As I try to clear my mind of the worldly things
    To just escape to this place of Peace and Love
    I'm......
    Longing for some Serenity
    My thoughts take me to this place
    Running through fields of flowers....
    Arms expanded
    Feeling free
    Slowly drifting off into a dream
    Where do I go from here
    ...
    ...
    Do I have to wake?
    Do I have to leave this place?
    Can I all ways return

    To...

    Love
    Peace
    &
    Serenity????​
    :qqb017:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no you don't have to awaken
    yes u can stay and bath inside it's beauty
    and find dat warmth of peace as love abids

    nice scribe
     
  3. Skybeauty

    Skybeauty Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Thanks for the compliment.....
     
  4. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This read like an hallmark nice mental image once again excellent write poet
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful sentiment displayed here.

    Get-On... wit' your BAD SELF!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such serenity you painted here, with words flowing like a gentle breeze. Welcome back to Destee.com. :)
     
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