Black Poetry : Question... (sorry had to vent)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shUt-Yo-M0uf, Nov 10, 2003.

  1. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    Question...



    its funny how people can take a tole on your emotions and expressions
    have you going through ups, downs, happy times, and depressions
    they'll have your mind feeling like its creating an obession
    when all you really want is an answer to your question
    question question question

    its funny how relationships can take a tole on your emotions and expressions
    have you going through ups, downs, happy times, and depressions
    they'll have your mind feeling like its creating an obession
    when all you really want is an answer to your question
    question question question

    not official
    but beneficial
    pain intentional
    some what superficial
    not real
    feelings revealed
    so surreal
    whats the deal
    am i yours
    dont ignore
    cant take this anymore
    no longer can i endure
    its gotta be official
    **** the benefical
    lets love unconditional
    no longer superficial
    i gotta have you
    im attached to
    in you im so into
    and this is true to
    why dont you understand
    gotta have you as my man
    come on lets began
    you as my right hand man

    its funny how people can take a tole on your emotions and expressions
    have you going through ups, downs, happy times, and depressions
    they'll have your mind feeling like its creating an obession
    when all you really want is an answer to your question
    question question question

    ANSWER MY QUESTION
    IM TIRED OF GUESSING!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa!! Da question question question !!!
    many speak yet answer untold as i watch this unfold
    dis was awesome and well pose'd
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good flow
    yes yes yes
    ask many question
    let it pour
    Peace
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweet all the way down...
    ask them questions... :angel1:
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin it, feelin it, yeah
     
  6. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    omg, this is soo tyte.ive been there. much love :)
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yeah not know'n
    can really take it's toll'n...
    tyte scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
  8. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Day-um, somebody better answer your *** soon or you're gonna go mental! Hope it's what you want to hear.
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I CAN FEEL THIS..

    I SAY THIS TO MYSELF LIKE EVERY DAY. TYTE FLOW.
     
  10. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel you completely man....
    i've learned that you count on others to answer ya questions...
    i answer them myself......remeber that.....cause only you and whoever you beleive
    in actually got tha answers...but nice script...def feelin it...welcome 2 destee....
    and one love.....
     
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