Black Poetry : Question: A poem by Tdogg

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  1. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

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    QUESTION



    Listen
    to the word
    as they make no sound
    do they seem to fall
    on hollow ground,
    do they make you tremble
    when hear you them aloud
    do they make you weak
    or do they make you proud.

    Question
    please if you can
    when a boy becomes a man
    is it on his own
    that he must learn to stand,
    if he should struggle
    and success he's gained
    would it become
    another man's journey to be claimed.

    People
    seem to answer
    they cannot hear
    even though
    the message is very clear,
    I don't know why
    they tell this lie
    when the reality of it they cannot deny.

    A girl
    is born with jealousy and pride
    for these are the skills
    should she survive,
    as she matures
    her life is replaced
    with charm and bueaty her body is graced.

    If she
    remains loyal to herself
    would she be denying
    other of her help,
    if the path she follows
    is not her own
    should she be ridiculed for the spirit she has shown.

    If we
    should answer
    must we remember why
    If we should answer
    can we ourselves pay the price,
    don't by the answer,
    be disillusioned
    for it is the reason for disharmony and confusion.

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  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really liked this one t, keep um coming
    much love,
    -story
     
  3. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you once again for taking the time out to read and comment and for your immediate response. Much love to also looking forward to reading some of your post. Signed Tdogg
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!

    very tyte scribe
    i see and hear
    the whispers spoken in tone
    for this flow is on !
     
  5. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $Rich$ for the love tell me how can read other post for I would also like to share some of the love and support for other flows which will be enlightment for the days ahead something we all need.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just click on their topic or the thread it will take you into their poem or post once u read their flow just stroll down below and in the box reply
    once done click submit reply it's done deal u feel me
    let me see you give it a try !
     
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    Tdogg u somethin hot 4 real i think u at the right place u poetic master:)
     
  8. tdogg

    tdogg Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your reply triniti it was an honor to have a post reply by the lady of poetic rythmic love. Signed Tdogg
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uhhh who u talkin bout Tdogg u R the one wit the skills blowin up this thread :)
     
  10. SeXiAzzMahMi

    SeXiAzzMahMi Banned

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    This was the first time i every read your work...

    I really did enjoy your flow,
    Very deep words indeed...

    Sam
     
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